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01/15/2008 11:34:36 PM |
| Sorry the shot is blurry and the colours are dull. Give your model another chance and do it over. |
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01/13/2008 10:12:15 PM |
| It might be ineresting to shoot this with a different, more interesting setting - perhaps seating the subject at a desk or at a library or something would have made this more interesting... I don't know. Just a thought! :) I like the idea you have here though. |
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01/13/2008 05:12:17 PM |
| I'd like to see the face a little sharper and just a touch brighter, it sort of just fades into the background. |
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01/13/2008 08:49:24 AM |
| This is a nice image that tells your story of a bookworm pretty well. I think it could use some hue adjustment to pull down the greens. They seem a little heavy because of the background and the book itself. Also, sharpening would have made her eyes brighter and brought out the specs more. |
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01/10/2008 03:43:21 PM |
| the colors are a little drab, but that may have been intentional. model did a good job. nice composition. |
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01/10/2008 01:47:23 PM |
| Overall lighting seems dim, face could use some sharpness and more light, maybe stand further from the wall to avoid seeing the shadow on the wall. |
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01/10/2008 01:42:01 PM |
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01/09/2008 10:04:01 PM |
| I like the pose and the colors. I think I might have tried to increase the contrast some. |
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01/09/2008 05:32:35 PM |
| The image seems out of focus to me. |
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01/09/2008 03:33:08 PM |
| It's a bit flat and lacking in contrast. Nice plain background, though. |
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01/09/2008 12:12:23 PM |
| The photo lacks contrast. Somewhat washed out. |
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01/09/2008 06:54:43 AM |
| This is a really cool concept, you could try to experiment with lighting. |
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01/09/2008 12:30:44 AM |
| Not sure what you're using for acamera or lens, but you lack contrast here as if you had lens flare or just a plastic lens. Color seems off a bit too. Not sharp. |
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