i was driving with my friends to my house and we saw this bridge on the way there. i drive by it everyday before and after school, and i've always wanted to take a portrait shot of my friend by some kind of old, dirty background. I love her body position. it shows that with just a simple snap of a button, anything can look good.
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Not a big fan of your cropping out the model's left foot....just one of the things I notice that ruins this picture for me....other than that, nice job.
Very good perspective and angles. Very pretty model. The outfit and keys go with the urban theme. IMO the phone/wallet (?) in the hip pocket is more of a distraction than a part of the personality (only minor though). My only serious complaint is that your focus seems a bit soft on her face, with sharper emphasis on her hip. A slight sharpening would help.
IMO One of only a few portraits in this challenge that has gone beyond the norm. Fantastic pose and a shot which undoutedly incorporates specatacles but does so with a degree of subtly...This shot is of a trendy urbanite who happens to be wearing glasses rather than of a pair of glasses which happen to have someones face behind them
I like the graduated blue from trousers to top to - could perhaps have been a toch sharper but still a great 8
Very nice focus, but you could have directed the viewers eyes to the glasses instead of her hair (it's a little bright). It is a little too posed for my taste.