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01/08/2008 11:53:22 PM |
| The left eye however is a tad out of focus, and the arm draws a straight line that makes the image a little bit stiff. Besides that it is a great portrait! |
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01/08/2008 10:41:32 PM |
| I like this......but I don't like standard portraits. The face is a little washed, and she seems a tad pale, though that may be just her coloration. Nice pensive expression, pretty model. I kind of agree with the arm as a distraction. |
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01/08/2008 10:02:18 PM |
I like the pose. I get so bored with the standard "stare ahead at the camera and smile" look. I didn't vote on this, but probably would've been between 5 and 6. I do think the arm is quite distracting, her back eye isn't quite in focus, and I'd like to see a little more contrast in her face. At the same time, her shirt is too dark - just seems kind of like a black hole below her face. But I'd bet with a little processing, you could make this much better. But 4.9 is crazy.
As always, though, do YOU like it? Does SHE like it? Much more important than a DPC score. :) |
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01/08/2008 09:01:56 PM |
| Portraits are tough in Free Study challenge, It really needs to be creative and stand out. Things I like about the shot is the Dof. The face and eye closest to you is sharp than fades out of focus. The eyes are well done. Dislikes are the lighting on the face is kinda flat with no shadows to give it more of a 3d effect. With all that said its a good portrait and I gave it a 6. ..Ace |
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01/08/2008 08:56:47 PM |
I think the overall DoF is terrific. If both eyes would have been in focus I think you would have nailed it. I am not sure about the arm, as you don't get to see the hand. I think seeing the whole hand would have improved the image. However, I still think it is a very stunning shot. The colors are terrific and the engagement of the subject is wonderful. I gave you a six in the challenge.
I think this was the case of the autopilot 5 voting going on with the occasion 4 to bring down the average. A shame.
Message edited by author 2008-01-08 20:57:39. |
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01/08/2008 08:51:55 PM |
| I didn't vote but I would have given this a 6. I like the photo but do think the face is a bit bright/washed out and the arm does distract as well. Seems that it could have been a bit sharper or used a bit more DOF. I do like the vignetteing as it really focuses you on her face and her look is nice. |
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01/08/2008 08:43:15 PM |
| I gave this a 5 after looking at it for a long time. The OOF arm that seems to be coming out of her chin was just more that I could handle. That and the fact that she is looking at you from such an uncomfortable angle. |
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01/08/2008 05:37:46 PM |
| I like this very much. Really don't understand how it could've received an under 5 score :-( I like the way she's looking at the camera, and that the eye closest to the camera is nice and clear. She has beautiful eyes and a great expression. I didn't vote, but if I had, I think this would've got a 7 from me. |
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01/08/2008 05:32:35 PM |
| I gave you a 6. Don't ask me how you got a below 5 score with this. |
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01/08/2008 11:19:58 AM |
| I gave this a 5. I generally do not like portraits, it has to be something really special for me to vote higher on a picture of a person I don't know. It looks a little washed out. |
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01/08/2008 11:19:41 AM |
| i gave this a 5 really didn't like the placement of her arm |
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01/08/2008 06:21:59 AM |
| Like Melethia said, this should not be below 5. I also think that the arm is distracting and I think that it would have been nice if the top and the right of the hairs was not cut off. Besides that, it's a very good portrait. |
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01/08/2008 03:10:44 AM |
| Doesn't deserve a sub-5 score, that's for sure. My only qualm with it is the horizontal of her arm - it momentarily pulls me away from her face. I very much like the natural look - not overprocessed, not overglitzed - just nicely real. |
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01/06/2008 01:38:44 PM |
| She is nice looking girl. I think bit more sharpness on her eye would be better. It seems like bit soft but overall a good photo :) |
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01/05/2008 01:26:06 AM |
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01/03/2008 02:26:40 PM |
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01/02/2008 10:12:54 PM |
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01/01/2008 04:49:24 PM |
| The focus is slightly soft and the face is slightly over exposed. |
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01/01/2008 04:39:35 PM |
| If you say so. Nice lighting. |
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