A bit of a blatent long exposure thing going on which is a bit of a shame as it almost says to me you had tried doing two entries concurrently and at the last minute entered this in the ebay catagory, rather than executing a single, well considered concept. The border is overly complex and inteferes with the hoizontal lines made by the top of the screen. The speaker area of the screen is aliasing which is a bit distracting. Even though I've knocked the long exposure effect, it is pretty good and might have been better with a computer game on the screen and a can of red bull on the table and entered into the other competition
Clever interpretation - really refreshing to see a directly relevant entry. This could have gone into the Long Exposure compo too! Personally I'd like to see a little more of the monitor on the left hand side...I think it needs a bit of breathing room, and the crop/frame/border is just too close for comfort in my eyes. Great stuff though.
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