Nice idea, but I think this could have been more interesting from a different angle, or less blue background, seems there is some noise at the top, and the lighting is a little harsh, 5 for the effort.
The composition seems a little awkward somehow, the text is very near to the bottom, you can see a very small amount of text just to the left of the "S" in Sun which could have been cropped out. I think that perhaps a simple macro of the sparks and motherboard without the case, text and blue surface in shot would have been a lot cleaner. The same simplification process could also be applied to the title, just "Negative Feedback" would have been spot on.
Reminds me of those Star Trek episodes where sparks fly out of the navigation panel every time the ship gets hit. (You would think that in the 23rd century, they would know enough to ground electrical devices!)
A fair amount of noise showing in this pic, especially on the blue background.
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