I'm guessing you have done this arrangement to make the subject look like something but your title is not really helping me. Looks like it could be in the shape of a flower perhaps? A rotation ccw to square up the main body would have made this work better IMO
The bright colors look really nice against the black background. It might be neat to unwind the earplug cords and loop them around in more interesting designs... just a thought. :)
I like the comp and the clashing colors. Some good work with the lighting. I think you did a good job of capturing the metallic finish. Not an Ipod fan myself, though I do have a modest collection of other brands of MP3 players.
The first thing that bugs me (apart from the colour) is the box is not quite straight. Might also be better to arrange it with the coil of wire off the photo, and the earphones writhing back in.
Love the composition and the colours. The only problem for me is that the I-pod is slight of in the horizontal to the bottom of the frame. For some reason this really does make the picture feel off. I appreciate that comment may sound very pedantic given how small an adjustment is needed but in this instance it is distracting (to me at least) enough to stop a potentially great image realising its full value
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