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12/20/2007 12:15:53 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club:
Since I couldn’t vote in this challenge, this is the first time I’ve had a chance to look at your image. My first impression was that this was a nice image of a toy car and that it would probably score around a 5. You did a nice job with the lighting and you tried to make the image interesting with the shallow depth of focus. As you can see from the comments you received, the shallow depth of focus is a love it or hate it kind of effect. Toys don’t score very well at DPC unless it is for a toy related challenge or the image is exceptionally creative. This is even truer for a challenge where the voters expect to see a real car in an ad type setting. Overall, the subject matter (toy), composition (straight on), and lack of dramatic lighting created an image that is good but not exciting and easy for the voter to give it a 5 and move on.
Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.
Tim
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12/16/2007 01:20:50 PM |
| Not terribly realistic-looking. |
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12/14/2007 10:24:12 PM |
| Nice selective focus. Looks too much like a model to me though. |
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12/14/2007 08:33:03 PM |
| Composition, framing, colors nice even for a toy. Too tight dof, but not bad overall :) |
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12/13/2007 11:48:14 PM |
| The shallow DOF hurts this one for me. I'd rather see the whole car in focus. 5 |
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12/13/2007 11:30:44 PM |
| I like the use of DOF on this shot....gives a sense of motion, even though the car is still. Kinda jumps in your face. |
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12/13/2007 05:45:30 PM |
| even though it is a toy car it is still a good pic |
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12/13/2007 05:42:17 PM |
| Nice shallow depth of field. |
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12/13/2007 02:22:08 PM |
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12/12/2007 05:10:59 PM |
| Nice shallow DOF on this toy car - not a big fan of the composition, but you have done well to display this. 6 |
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12/12/2007 02:25:00 PM |
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12/12/2007 10:34:59 AM |
| I give you big props for the concept, would have like to seen better depth of field and maybe another angle. But using a toy car gave me the 'why didn't I think of that' feeling. |
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12/12/2007 07:57:09 AM |
| I am not liking the toycar being used here. This has a very snapshot feel to it, and as such, will probably score averagely overall. nothing in this shot excites me or provokes a reaction.. sorry. |
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12/10/2007 11:12:39 PM |
I love it.
My boyfriend drives the same one.
<3 hee hee |
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12/10/2007 09:44:15 PM |
| Personally I wouldn't buy a toy viper and the top half of the car is oof. I don't care for this image, sorry |
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12/10/2007 09:34:23 AM |
| Uninspired title.....and I'm having a hard time going with a met challenge here with this not even being a real car. |
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12/10/2007 06:25:20 AM |
| The DOF is a bit too thin here. I'd close it up at least one stop for a shallow DOF, or 2-3 stops to get it all in focus. |
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12/10/2007 05:05:50 AM |
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12/10/2007 12:49:55 AM |
| The viper... Nice DOF. Technically a good shoot. I would like to see the 1:1 scale car's in this challenge. IMHO -5- |
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