It's a very nice photo. I like the duo color selection, but I don't know about the out of focus on the left face. I would do either have everything sharp, or have left face much more blur. Overall, good photo :)
The lighting on your cheeks is a bit harsh for me; maybe bumping up your aperture setting or upping your shutter speed would help. Your eyes appear to be half asleep also. BB
Lighting is a bit harsh on the face. I really like your idea though, and think if the shot on the left was a bit more in focus this would have really bumped up the quality of your SP. Nice work.