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01/04/2008 02:35:06 PM |
| Looks nice, might want to pull back on the sharpening some. There are halos around the cuffs of the shirt and I think it's giving the overall image more of a harsh feel than it would otherwise have. |
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01/04/2008 01:35:01 PM |
this looks like a nice start with your new lights! her expression is great!
hope you don't mind giving you some tips:
- try to move your light a bit. Right now the light is almost from straight forward (you can see the reflection in the pupils) andthat way you can change the reflection and the atmosphere (shadow / light) in the photo.
- I'm not sure what brollies are, but the light is a bit harsh. If that's what you were after, then it's great, but using a softbox really softens the light and gives more atmosphere.
I hope these were helpful! |
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11/20/2007 01:07:47 PM |
| This too I think I would like to see in color. A well done b&w conversion but with the fun expression I think color would make it more alive. |
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