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11/13/2007 01:47:26 PM |
Sorry, looks blown out, and there's no leading of the eye (except for wondering why the shadow is there at top). |
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11/13/2007 10:16:05 AM |
I usually have a hard time taking pictures of lighter things. What happened here sometimes happens to me - the flash killed the detail and texture of the popcorn. |
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11/13/2007 02:29:22 AM |
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11/12/2007 10:32:10 PM |
nice close up, but light looks a little strong imo |
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11/12/2007 07:52:43 PM |
this doesn't tell much of a story |
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11/12/2007 02:50:46 AM |
Not a fan of the lighting on this one. I would say if you are going this direction I would like to see uniform lighting on all the corn. |
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11/11/2007 06:35:12 PM |
Not interesting..and the shadow across the top is distracting.. |
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11/11/2007 01:41:13 AM |
Strong focus on the popcorn but it's a bit too static and ordinary. Perhaps shooting from underneath the popcorn, say under a glass table and showing a hand reaching for it would have upped the wow factor. Also, watch your exposure. The highlights are a bit too bright. I might try diffusing the light more so it's not so harsh. |
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11/10/2007 11:08:25 PM |
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11/09/2007 04:05:52 PM |
If it weren't for the shadow in the upper right, the blownhighlights wouldn't bother me. It would almost give it a certain "tone" or mood. However, the shadow makes it look unintentional. |
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11/09/2007 12:51:27 PM |
The top kernels seem just a bit overexposed to me. Hard to photograph mostly light tones. Could help to use manual mode on the camer. |
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11/09/2007 11:48:58 AM |
This shot doesn't seem like a lot of thought went into it. It is a little too busy for me, and I think that you should have all the kernels in focus. The shadow is also distracting. This shot is just really bland. |
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11/09/2007 07:59:04 AM |
It would have helped to crop of the shadow, but it would still have been a fairly uninteresting image. (4) |
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11/08/2007 11:22:26 PM |
Needs some more contrast, and an identifiable point of interest would be helpful. |
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11/08/2007 08:29:19 PM |
this is far to blown out but if you had cropped the shaddow out it could've work |
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11/08/2007 11:14:05 AM |
the DOF seems a bit too shallow and the image seems blown out due to harsh lighting |
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11/07/2007 07:41:14 PM |
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11/07/2007 07:28:56 PM |
overexposed, poor composition |
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11/07/2007 09:37:28 AM |
Looks to be a stop or two over-exposed? |
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11/07/2007 09:27:07 AM |
The lighting seems too washed out. Not enough focus on the popcorn. |
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11/07/2007 05:32:43 AM |
over exposed and too little depth pf field |
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11/07/2007 12:50:24 AM |
i feel like theres just too much here, and the shadow going across the top from the right is distracting |
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11/07/2007 12:35:27 AM |
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