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Challenge: Single Light Source III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D50
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.4D
Location: Lebanon, Tennessee
Date: Nov 6, 2007
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/500
Galleries: Portraiture, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Nov 6, 2007

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Statistics
Place: 95 out of 199
Avg (all users): 5.3397
Avg (commenters): 5.2222
Avg (participants): 5.0625
Avg (non-participants): 5.4224
Views since voting: 805
Views during voting: 355
Votes: 209
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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12/03/2007 07:59:34 PM
I think this is a good portrait and I don't mind the feet. I think getting closer would have helped, or had her stand a few feet from the wall. I notice when that close to the background it is hard to get any separation and models seem to blend. Also I don't think the lighting is that harsh although some of her face has strong shadows. What I use is a piece of foamcore covered in aluminum foil. If you put this just out of the frame on the right, it would bounce some light onto her face and soften the shadows. That lens you used is great for portraits, dont be afraid to get close and use a large aperture like 2.0 or less, :) Personally I think this should have scored higher. :)
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/13/2007 11:14:47 AM
lighting is too harsh from the side; lots of overexposure on the jacket/arm; pose isn't very interesting or engaging; composition is to weighted to the right
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11/12/2007 11:54:09 AM
boring subject, but nice comp
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11/12/2007 09:42:22 AM
lighting a bit too hot...a 5
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11/10/2007 10:22:44 PM
Very attractively done.
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11/10/2007 07:19:15 PM
Since you have included so much or her legs it looks odd that her feet are missing.
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11/10/2007 03:24:09 AM
noisy, soft
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11/08/2007 12:12:46 PM
Somehow I feel the focus was more on the brick wall than on the young woman. good approach to take the pic from her eye level.
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11/07/2007 11:10:36 PM
Cutie :)
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11/07/2007 09:04:37 PM
if I could see her feet it would had been better. It looks like you cut her feet
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