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11/22/2007 08:06:42 AM |
| Cool perspective, it draws attention right to her beautiful blue eyes. As for sour I don't know what to say, maybe the color of her skin is a bit on the grey side. |
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11/19/2007 05:05:06 PM |
I think this is a great 'out of the ordinary' portrait. I am a big fan of 'half face' shots and I love the way that you have used the brickwork to create the effect. I also think that the vignetting on the left side of the frame works well as it brings out the almost transllucent skin of the models face. Great job on the eyes too and I love the fact that they in many ways 'match' the jewellery she is wearing (I always think it is the little touches like this that help turn a good shot into a great one)
Sour...I may have been tempted to crop slightly more on the right side of the frame to exclude the area where the brickwork/building changes patterns |
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11/18/2007 02:01:38 PM |
| I like the perspective and the use of the bricks as a frame - especially as they are at different layers. It seems to me that the focus seems sharpest on her hair not her eye - not sure how that happened. Also, I think by cropping out the dark section of bricks on the right, we would have a more dramatic picture by placing her eye at the left third |
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