the lighting seems a bit harsh, maybe bouncing the flash or using a diffuser would help tone it down. The lack of directional light and use of head on lighting gives a somewhat dull and snapshot feel, imo.
Interesting subject. I think there's too much space at the top of the frame and obviously the arm on the left shouldn't be there. Perhaps a tighter crop would have helped.
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