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11/06/2007 05:07:54 PM |
Good idea and pretty model.
I think (for me) it could be improved by having her on a bike more fitting to the outfit, so maybe a Harley or something a little more 'grungy' to go with the skull and cross bones top (rather than a silver sports bike), and the bars/safety rail just above her chest is visually very distracting.
Have her in the same pose on a different bike outside a nightclub or a graffiti strewn wall and this would look quite different. |
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11/03/2007 01:55:46 AM |
Window as background is poor composition. |
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11/02/2007 03:23:15 PM |
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11/01/2007 10:46:36 AM |
Nice idea, but I think the focus should be on her pretty eyes. |
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11/01/2007 08:03:30 AM |
there are too many distractions in the background (bottle, bar, red thing, paper on ground etc) |
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11/01/2007 02:51:39 AM |
Good model, distracting location and terrible lighting.
If you wanted her left breast to be the focus then you've succeeded. Personally I think her face should have been more in focus and lit much better. Her skin tone is very orangey and whatever is resting on the ledge behind her right cheek now appears to be growing out of it.
If you get an opportunity with a model like this, take some time to think about all the details we'll be viewing.
Most importantly her eye's should have been clear and unshadowed.
Check out the tutorial by idnic called Pimp those Eyes. |
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11/01/2007 01:03:50 AM |
Is she a model or a Biker chick????????? 7 |
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11/01/2007 12:25:53 AM |
Not a Ducati ... too bad. Otherwise a fine photo. Bright band at the top detracts. In general, watch your background. |
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