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09/28/2002 10:46:00 PM |
| Pretty cool! I may have been tempted to leave out the other building and the motorcycle, while focusing in more on the tables/main building. Perhaps standing a few steps to the left could have accomplished that...? |
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09/28/2002 08:12:00 PM |
| That's quite a coffee place! The black and white doesn't really work for me here-- probably because it masks a lot of the detail to be found in the beautiful old buiilding. --5-- sohr |
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09/26/2002 05:59:00 PM |
| I only wish... doesn't matter how the coffee tastes! |
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09/26/2002 05:03:00 PM |
yes, but do they have donuts? ;-)
nice shot. |
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09/25/2002 09:47:00 PM |
| Served by the padre? Interesting. JEM |
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09/25/2002 05:30:00 PM |
| A little overexposed. At least, darken and boost contrast. A bit cluttered in the foreground. |
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09/25/2002 04:39:00 PM |
| goood... the black 'n white makes it even better in my eyes! |
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09/24/2002 11:42:00 PM |
| Is that tree on the left really necessary to be in this composition? I find the building interesting, especially the one with the two openings. I also think that a vertical compositio nworks better -- move 3-4 steps to the right, making the building a bit symmetrical, go vertical on your camera, move a bit closer so that the seats, table, shade be a main interesting and let the contrast between the white umbrella and the nice texture of the building do the talking. The tree and the open space on the left is just too distracting, for me. 6 paganini |
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09/24/2002 03:45:00 PM |
| I dont think B&W works well.. It would be more interesting to see the old building contrasted with the new chairs/building in color... |
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09/24/2002 03:34:00 PM |
| I think I'm turning into a BW fan! good job 8 smshats |
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09/24/2002 02:46:00 PM |
| Like the idea. Did you try vertical with just the tables & umbellas + church as backdrop? Could also be interesting. 6 chakkobbo |
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09/24/2002 09:07:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing8,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating6. Autool
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09/23/2002 02:09:00 PM |
| Very cool looking spot. Good luck. Justine |
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09/23/2002 02:02:00 PM |
| Needs stronger composition, maybe if it had been taken portrait, instead of landscapped to see more of the building behind. Just leaves me wanting to see more of the surroundings... |
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