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08/02/2008 10:13:30 PM |
| A fun image that works for me..... I love color..... |
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10/31/2007 07:28:27 AM |
Critique Club Comment:
Good things:
The colors here are so nice and vibrant!
You did a great job with aligning the white lines in the center. I love attention to detail like that.
So-so things:
The composition doesn't really draw me in at all. Maybe if you had tightened the crop to include only the middle part? Or, maybe relocate the place where the colors all come together, so that this part is on a rule-of-thirds intersecting point, or something like that. The centered composition just isn't very engaging in this image to my eyes.
Border color is okay but I may have prefered a smaller, possibly black border.
All in all, good shot, just didn't grab me very much, but very much a decent (and cheerful, with all those colors!) image. |
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10/29/2007 10:56:24 AM |
This is such a clean, crisp abstract, Anna! The lines and colors are perfect!
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10/28/2007 02:01:14 PM |
| Very graphic-y - I like it! |
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10/27/2007 02:27:56 AM |
| Ha! What a hip image and title!! I love your creativity, and your crisp detail and colors are fabulous! |
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10/26/2007 08:52:56 PM |
| Nice effect with the lines |
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10/25/2007 04:50:42 AM |
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10/24/2007 04:39:19 PM |
| Sweet and simple. Very clever. I wish the sheets of PANTONE wasn't so clearly visible :) 9. |
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10/22/2007 06:04:40 AM |
| Paint swatches! Great idea - and you did such a good job of adding complexity of the lines through the compostion. Very good vision here. |
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10/22/2007 05:35:50 AM |
| Great concept and very clinical execution. would have been even better if the other white lines were also in some kinda pattern |
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10/22/2007 12:32:37 AM |
| Extremely creative. I really like this image. 9 |
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