I like the concept, but the soft focus on the eye makes me look for other parts of the image that are in focus. I would offer one thing and that would be that you be tack sharp on the eye and move everything else ouy of focus. I think that would have helped your chances here. That being said maybe you wanted the soft focus and in that case I would have wanted to see that reflected in the title so we wouldn't have to draw our own conclusions.
Soft Rainbow Vision or A Vision of Soft Rainbows, I'm sure you see what I mean.
Nicely done. Good rainbow spectrum. The color of the eye itself looks a bit odd being white, but I guess in doing so it doesn't detract from what you're going for.
That has to be the palest blue eye I have ever seen!
I like the makeup to make the rainbow. But the eye itself seems to lack some punch - a bit more contrast might help. A slightly different angle of the shot might also do the trick - it seems to be shot while looking down at the eye - would bring out that awesome pale iris by allowing more light on the eye itself