I think that the border you've added helps to draw the eye into the subject, but it seems to be a bit overdone here. I know it's not legal in basic, but some burning around the edges would have looked a lot better. Aside from that, you may get some comments on the noise, but I think it adds to the image. Focus is dead on, so I'm guessing that you know your photography skills are adept enough to have done the noise on purpose.