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Following the LIght
Following the LIght
anissaerb


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Challenge: Free Study 2007-10 (Advanced Editing V)
Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Tamron AF 28-200mm f/3.8-5.6 Aspherical XR IF Super Zoom for Nikon
Location: Hampton, GA
Date: Oct 6, 2007
Galleries: Portraiture, Photojournalism
Date Uploaded: Oct 9, 2007

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Place: 401 out of 521
Avg (all users): 5.2478
Avg (commenters): 5.2000
Avg (participants): 5.2697
Avg (non-participants): 5.1667
Views since voting: 884
Views during voting: 227
Votes: 113
Comments: 6
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11/05/2007 09:25:31 PM
Beautiful simplicity.
11/02/2007 08:47:08 PM
The foliage at the bottom is a distraction - I'd crop it out.
11/02/2007 07:12:30 PM
Beautiful shot. I like the lighting on the hair and how it glows.
11/02/2007 03:53:08 AM
Burning of background is excessive and looks unnatural. Composition feels unbalanced, too much negative space on left, and unsure as to whether you wanted the model in the centre or not. Light is terrible, bad shadows cast especially on the wall and her face. She looks a little too posed, you don't want a snapshot. Her face is a little red/purple which should have been fixed in PS. Lots of highlights in the dress make the composition worse, and take focus away from the face. Inclusion of plants in the foreground looks accidental, you should either have not included them, or make more of a feature of them. Her pose has not flattered her figure, she looks like she's wearing a sack. I would have asked her to bring her hip in or to hide behind the door more. Hands are a very important part of any portrait, it looks like she wasn't sure what to do with her right hand. She doesn't seem terribly sharp, either bad focus or wrong shutter speed.
11/01/2007 10:25:24 PM
she needs more light on her face.
11/01/2007 07:48:03 PM
This would have been an even more beautiful shot if a reflector had been used to put more light on her face. Pretty girl, pleasant look on her face, great composition.


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