You met the challenge by including the parents on the right, but the image as it exists here is quite cluttered and distracting to me. The pinks in the blanket and pants, along with the tennis racquets and the plastic bag, do nothing to help the image.
I would suggest taking a tight crop of the girl and doe she's feeding, and converting that to black and white or sepia tone. Judging by the look and posing of the girl relative to the deer, I think you'd have an excellent shot in your portfolio.
Nice picture of a day out in nature (well, in nature, the deer wouldn't be so close, right?) As a grou portrait, I don't think much of it. No faces and disturbing items all over (4)
I would have loved to see this photo with a soft focus, the grass and ski a little brighter, and without the tennis raquet's and bag. I think it would have looked more peaceful that way. Great job though!
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