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10/09/2007 07:36:58 AM |
| Has a nice sense of freedom to it - very nicely composed and what a beautiful location. |
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10/07/2007 10:27:16 PM |
| I don't know but it looks a little bit overprocessed. colors saturated too much. and distant figures sharpened too much. Composition OK but I would have given a little more space to the top and right to focus on the "Kite" in space. which after all is the title of this picture. As it is now, the kite almost gets lost when one is looking at the picture. My focus remains at the bottom of the picture where all of the action is. Maybe the cropping is just too close for the kite to come into view. Here is an opportunity to use more negative space. |
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10/06/2007 11:24:10 PM |
| Excellent composure and crop |
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10/06/2007 06:42:12 PM |
| I like your image. The one thing my eyes seem to do is either stay and look up at the kite or just stay focused on the bottom where the people are. I don't look at your image as a whole necessarily, but as two photos. I think its because of the large distance gap. |
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10/05/2007 09:26:02 PM |
| Really well put together. Extraordinary comp. |
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10/05/2007 03:05:54 PM |
| The subjects of this photo just don't seem to take up enough of the frame. there is a wide expanse of nothing between the man and the kite. |
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10/05/2007 02:46:18 PM |
| I just din't find anything in this that made me want to keep looking at it. The one positive is that it looks like the family had a lot of fun. |
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10/05/2007 01:00:35 PM |
| Nice picture with gentle tones and perfect crop. |
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10/01/2007 03:01:39 PM |
| love this image ... it really has a nostalgic feel to it ... great job! |
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10/01/2007 12:20:57 PM |
| I like this shot. I wish there was more color and textures in the sky background but I do like the overall composition of this image. |
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10/01/2007 10:17:34 AM |
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10/01/2007 09:44:56 AM |
| Great composition and colors! |
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10/01/2007 08:52:32 AM |
| I like the line of the kite string - nice use of the diagonal. The pops of red are nice as well. |
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10/01/2007 08:39:21 AM |
I have to say i really like this shot. The diagonal that you have created with the lines from the kite is understated but cool. Equally I have to say great cropping to get the kit flier and the kite positioned as they are
The other people in the frame should really be a distraction, but for some reason they arent and add to the general feel of the shot
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10/01/2007 08:25:41 AM |
| very well composed, though the sky is quite dull you turned this into a very vivid scene |
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10/01/2007 02:16:54 AM |
| Super composition, colours seem a bit flat. |
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