To make something like this work focus needs to be spot on - and I'm afraid that's not the case here. Focus here seems to be a tiny bit in front of the drops.
Very nice. The big drop looks fuzzy, which doesn't matter a lot but it probably does if you want a bumper dpc score. Pretty little minimal half-abstract though.
Voted low, The dof needs to be greater. Only a tiny part of the feather is clear and the rest is blurred almost to the point of unrecognizable. I find water drops need to be crystal clear.
2nd part if the bright orange. Very sharp contrast to the softness of the feather.. don't know if that is what you were going for.
A nice take on the water drop thing and I like the use of a feather. The focus is just slightly off, though, which for a shot like this probably needs to be dead on. The orange behind is quite pretty but in a way steals the show from the drops. It does make for a very nice near-abstract, though.