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10/02/2007 10:45:03 PM |
THIS is what a 'S' curve should look like. :) The lines lead to the primary subject and take the viewer thru the image. Hooray!
As for the image, I like the way the trees are forming a natural frame/tunnel for the train to come thru. Keeps the viewers focused and in a natural place as well (train is close to the upper ROT point).
Would be a tad stronger if the train was sharply focused instead of the tracks, but nonetheless I still like it overall. Good luck in the challenge. |
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09/29/2007 02:16:07 PM |
| Miss shooting train shots. Good luck psart 8 |
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09/29/2007 10:58:10 AM |
| I've tried to figure out what bothers me about this one. The angle is good, the track s shape is interesting. The smoke is nice ( although I'd like to see more of it ). I think the problem for me is that the photo seems slightly blurred. To me the photo should either be tack sharp or shot with a slow shutter speed to show motion in the train. This photo seems to be somewhere in between and just doesn't have impact in my opinion. |
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09/28/2007 11:52:39 PM |
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09/28/2007 07:47:48 AM |
| Did I see this same train as another entry? Good general composition, Wish the colors popped a bit more and that the train was more in focus. |
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09/26/2007 10:58:11 PM |
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09/26/2007 05:41:01 PM |
| I feel like I've seen this train already in this challenge. |
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09/26/2007 02:19:33 PM |
| Wonderful composition, great colors... wonderful example of the S curve challenge! 10 for me! :) |
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09/26/2007 12:59:13 PM |
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