|Wow, lovely exposure & great colors. I like her expression too. What I don't like is her pose, its so static and lifeless, I'm sure that isn't her personality. Also, the brown hair ribbon, white straps and red straps just clash. I would clone out the red and just go with brown & white to compliment the green of the bg. I think a tighter crop as well, removing most of the blouse and focusing on the face & that stunning bokeh & lighting would really make this image sing. I sure hope that helps.
Edit: Your reflector is a bit bright, you might tone that down a bit to better match the rest of the skintone. :)
Message edited by author 2007-09-05 21:42:36.