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Challenge: Free Study 2007-09 (Advanced Editing V)
Camera: Kodak Z740
Location: Coconino County Fair, AZ
Date: Sep 2, 2007
Aperture: f/3.20
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/750 sec
Galleries: Emotive, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Sep 3, 2007

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Statistics
Place: 494 out of 503
Avg (all users): 4.5042
Avg (commenters): 4.4375
Avg (participants): 4.4111
Avg (non-participants): 4.7931
Views since voting: 684
Views during voting: 187
Votes: 119
Comments: 18
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/06/2007 04:45:09 PM
The cropping of his feet and the bench plus the centre position of the subject do not help to strengthen the photo.
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10/05/2007 10:03:36 PM
For me, this is way too washed out. It looks more like an illustration rather than a photograph. I do wonder what the original looks like.
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10/05/2007 03:04:17 PM
Did not care for the effect here. I was left wanting to see more details on the subject.
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10/03/2007 08:39:56 PM
Very interesting processing. I can't wait to read about it. Really neat.
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10/03/2007 01:43:51 PM
This would be better IMO if the the darks were darker making it have more contrast. 5
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10/03/2007 12:03:25 AM
I really love the look on his face, like there is something that he just can't stop thinking about. I only wished that it wasn't so washed out, if there were just a bit more contrast between his arms/shoulders/head and the white background, just a little bit more. Otherwise, I really like the look and feel of this photo.
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10/02/2007 06:50:12 AM
A little two 'sketch-like' for my photographic tastes. 5
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10/01/2007 10:14:21 PM
Voted on low side,

The white contrast adds a little but the subject is not unique enough to make him appealing. He is centered on the bench and would have prefered to have him on either end. The crop cuts off just a peice of the bench, would like to see either more of the bench cut off or have it entirely visible. Can barely make out the drink and seems placed unnaturally.
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10/01/2007 09:37:33 PM
I admire your chutzpah for entering something that looks so much like a pencil drawing. I like it a lot, as it captures a very lonely feeling. I'm not sure about the composition, though.
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10/01/2007 09:35:43 PM
too much processing here, not sure I like the "whiteout" look here.
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10/01/2007 11:29:05 AM
nicely done high key - 8
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10/01/2007 11:05:49 AM
Interesting choice for high key. Wish he wasnt cropped off at the feet.
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10/01/2007 11:00:47 AM
The high-key effect just doesn't work for me on this one. It looks like he's watching a nuclear bomb going off.
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10/01/2007 10:13:23 AM
Oh dear. This is too washed out for me. It looks like a good composition but I just can't get over the technicals of this.
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10/01/2007 04:29:33 AM
Too overexposed IMO
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10/01/2007 02:21:44 AM
The high key doesn't work for me here.
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10/01/2007 12:39:57 AM
overexposed doesnt work for me on this pic---
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10/01/2007 12:12:00 AM
Nice attempt at high key, but I'd like to see a bit more definition around your subject.
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