Thnx to Chris for posing.
cut out two holes in my BG, made his hands dirty and wrapped the chain around him.
lighting is a flash from the left with snoot.
PP:
crop
levels
dodge
burn
desat a bit
saturate knuckles and chain a bit
clouds>grain>overlay
add txt
border
save for web
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You have asked 'what you could have done better'. This is my personal view. This photo is very good photo. I could not think of any flaw in it. Very good.
There is just a small problem, it does not motivate me (enough)
and probably this is the reason it did not score higher.
ps: My own photo was not good in this challenge. But I was not serious towards this challenge.