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02/08/2004 11:05:03 PM |
PB&J, without a doubt the most well know together pair! This is a college student's main staple, along with mac and cheese. The shot is a bit bright and out of focus. Also, knowing several college students, they would never cut off the crusts, they are always hungry and would eat every single crumb! ;)
The knife is a bit of distraction because it's so clean with just the touch of peanut butter on the end, seems there should be peanut butter and jelly smeared on it from cutting the bread and the clean cuts on the bread also are a bit to clean, you know? A 5 to start, going to a 6 |
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02/07/2004 01:08:07 PM |
| Had the same idea myself (peanut b. and jelly at leat), but ddn't end up shooting it because I could not do it artistically. This meets the challenge well, but lacks a sense of "flare" or artistry. Personally, I was going to try smearing the peanut butter and jelly together on a glass plate in a nice swirly pattern and shoot it as a closeup. |
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02/06/2004 03:09:30 AM |
A little off focus but good idea maybe a little messy but hey a person has to eat!
And you should eat your crusts! |
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02/05/2004 02:16:13 PM |
| Good idea, just needs more work to come together compositionally. |
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02/02/2004 08:53:26 PM |
| Nice effort, but needs a little work. |
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02/02/2004 07:19:11 PM |
| DOF could be better on jars. |
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02/02/2004 07:14:18 PM |
| I don't dislike your idea but the composition is a little weak. Things look a bit lined up and un-natural. P.S. Eat your crust!! |
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02/02/2004 07:12:54 PM |
| PB&J. Yum,yum. You don't even have to be "young" or "studying" to enjoy this treat. Quite nicely photographed. Could be just a tad sharper. |
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02/02/2004 04:12:51 PM |
| I'm surprised to only see one peanut butter & jelly shot in this challenge (I prefer JIF). What is the brown stain in the back of the picture? |
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02/02/2004 11:04:54 AM |
| Looks like I can see your shadow top left and focus could be more crisp. I do like your take on the subject of cutting off the crust. |
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02/02/2004 10:16:40 AM |
| I'm surprised there weren't more of these. 8 for idea! |
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02/02/2004 01:28:17 AM |
| Yes, they do go together. You've made some attempt to balance the composition, but on the whole, I feel that the subject matter isn't particularly interesting. It's just too ordinary for me. 3 |
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