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08/07/2007 12:18:40 PM |
***From the Critique Club***
First Impression - the most important one:
Hmm, I find the image very simple... yet hard to look away from! This picture has that something that makes me want to look just a little bit longer, to try and understand it.
Composition:
I love the tree's position but I think I would have placed the green, what Ill call, pea, a little more off center. I’m not sure how possible that would have been, but I think I may have cropped out a bit around the left wall and bottom of the picture.
Subject:
Simple, still, great. I like it.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
There is something about this picture that is just a little on the bland side, and I think that that would fall into this category. I like the focus and the lighting. However I think you should have put a bit more into the green. just to pump it up a little.
Artistic:
Very artistic, that’s for sure. definitely a great job on this side of things!
To grow its vote?:
sadly I'm not sure many people appreciate the subtle beauty in this picture. You can tell that by the 2's and 3's it received, (which is a real shame). My only suggestions are as follows, a bit tighter crop, and amp up the green just a pinch.
Summary:
I like it; it has room for improvement of course. I think a 5.8889 is a very fair score for the picture.
Wow very strong start for a first submission. I can’t wait to see the improvements, and more pictures to come. Just a side note your average vote cast is 4.4107, that a bit low, personally I try and keep it between 5.0-5.5. But anyways that just a side.
Happy shooting, CBoydrun
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07/31/2007 08:40:54 AM |
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07/31/2007 12:30:44 AM |
| Very zen-like. Love the quietness of this image. |
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07/30/2007 03:05:33 AM |
| Background is distracting oof screen?- and maybe better w/o lower branch. Very appealing shot though. 7 |
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07/26/2007 09:22:14 PM |
| This is beautiful delicate composition, but I don't feel it has enough light, I would like the soo the fruit pop out a little more, with a little more life |
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07/26/2007 07:21:03 PM |
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07/26/2007 12:33:57 PM |
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07/26/2007 05:39:28 AM |
simple lines & nice, could do with a little more dramatic lighting
or a different background |
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07/26/2007 01:38:37 AM |
| Nice shot. I'd like to see it cropped in a 3:2 proportion. |
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07/25/2007 12:14:26 PM |
| simple,artsy and very beautiful. Great lines too! |
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