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08/07/2007 09:51:40 AM |
Greetings from the critique club :)
I don´t have much to say about this image so I´ll keep this short. I do like it and probably would have given it a 6 had I voted in the challenge. It´s pretty well lit and definately meets the challenge. I would maybe have included some backlighting from the right had I taken this photo but not neccesarily sure it would have turned out better. Painting with light is well done and suits the subject. All in all it´s pretty well done technically.
However, I am not really surprised it didn´t score better, while well done there isn´t really anything that pops out from this picture, kindof mostly lacks that "wow" factor and I don´t know what that could have been. Maybe a goldfish swimming in that beer? The grinch reaching for the peanuts? Also I think personally I would have voted this higher if the backround had been an out of focus bar table instead of black but that´s just me.
Kind regards from Iceland, Lárus. |
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07/31/2007 04:48:40 PM |
| good quality shot but not very original. |
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07/31/2007 01:25:23 PM |
| I would of set the beer and peanut closer together, they would of look more combined. |
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07/31/2007 09:02:20 AM |
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07/31/2007 12:31:35 AM |
| Nice lighting...love the glow! |
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07/29/2007 07:15:18 PM |
| I just got really thirsty nice job |
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07/26/2007 01:24:23 PM |
Great lighting and professionally done. Those nuts are really lively! Thanks for providing some light around the mug so it isn't floating in space, I appreciate that. I love the specular higlight that isn't overwhelming and the great modeling light. The only suggestion would be to perhaps include a background light just to give it a little more "classical" feel, but that is just a personal preference. Oh yea and those crumbs don't do anything for me :)
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07/26/2007 03:49:15 AM |
| nice, refreshing & warm. good one! |
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07/26/2007 01:27:17 AM |
You could have had a very good picture here, but you have too much seperation between the drink and the peanuts. It's like there is two seperate pictures going on here. I think it would have had a lot more impact had you put the bowl right next to the glass and maybe had the lose peanuts around the base of the glass. This would have given a connection between the two objects. I think it's croped a bit tight on the left side as well.
Lighting is good as is color and focus. I could have gone a 9 or even a 10 had it been placed just a little bit better. |
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07/25/2007 06:14:31 PM |
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07/25/2007 07:18:00 AM |
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