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Challenge: Free Study 2007-07 (Advanced Editing V*)
Collection: Challenges
Camera: Nikon D200
Lens: Nikon AF-S Zoom-Nikkor 28-70mm f/2.8D IF-ED
Location: Saco, Maine
Date: Jul 16, 2007
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Family, Children
Date Uploaded: Jul 22, 2007

My nephew AJ. He was visiting from Ca. with my mom. Auto levels and contrast, curves, cropped and sized

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Place: 521 out of 651
Avg (all users): 5.1852
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.1182
Avg (non-participants): 5.4800
Views since voting: 599
Views during voting: 167
Votes: 135
Comments: 2
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09/10/2007 08:26:49 PM
Technicals: I think the biggest thing limiting you here is the lighting. It's fairly flat. Interestingly, although your nephew looks nice and vertical, the lines in the house behind are off kilter. Sometimes that's a product of the house not being square with the face of the lens (rather than the picture really being that far off balance). Still, lines like that are unfortunate and it's good to try to avoid them or straighten them.

The feel: I do like the contemplative moment. One hard thing with portraits is that you know AJ and we don't so we don't see "inside" the look. That can be hard when presenting subtle shots to the masses.

The game: Because of both above the shot lacks "wow". If you are going for higher scores, you need more of this which could translate as more dynamic lighting or as a more expressive model.
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08/01/2007 07:22:58 PM
i like the shallow DOF and the lighting on AJs face - but the fence really distracts me
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