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08/19/2007 10:18:47 PM |
| This one has a lot of potential, but seems just a little out of focus to my eye. The lighting is almost there, but drops off a little too much IMO on the left. Nice simple lines and good color. |
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07/23/2007 07:09:27 AM |
Mike,
I like the color and composition of this image. The primary issue is the lighting. The hot spot on the upper right tends to draw my attention and hold on to it. The eyes naturally look for a place to rest and hone in on. When an image is primarily a pattern like this one, sometimes it is better not to have a resting place or focal point and allow the eye to wander through the image. However, the "catch light" effect of the hot spot I mentioned provides a focal point and it takes away from the overall effect of the image.
I would suggest that you clone out the hot spots and send this one to the printer.
Tim
Edit: Typed to fast.
Message edited by author 2007-07-23 07:16:07. |
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07/23/2007 02:54:06 AM |
| The contrast and colour is brill! |
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