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Not too happy...
Not too happy...
Kelli


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Challenge: Natural Light Portrait (Advanced Editing V*)
Collection: Challenge entries 2007/2008
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S9000
Location: nj
Date: Jul 17, 2007
Aperture: f/3.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 0.100s
Galleries: Family, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Jul 17, 2007

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Place: 321 out of 366
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Views since voting: 639
Views during voting: 278
Votes: 218
Comments: 6
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07/30/2007 06:29:36 AM
Heh! She really does look just a wee bit miffed about the whole thing. Light is excellent to me. I like just the very hint of catchlights in the eyes.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/23/2007 06:30:11 PM
She isn't, is she! I suspect that you ran this through a fairly heavy dose of noise reduction software - there a few tell tale signs where the texture is too smooth, notably the girl's hair and her t-shirt. A shallower depth of field would have thrown the background out of focus even more - next time watch out for distractions such as the wall running through the girl's head. I sound very negative - it's not bad, just not quite there.
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07/21/2007 11:33:40 PM
When you loose the hair texture like this, then you know you've gone way too far with NoiseNinja/NeatImage
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07/19/2007 10:48:12 PM
the gaus blur or airbrush effect makes the hair look a little funky /5
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07/18/2007 11:27:03 AM
Your focus is soft and the pixels on the left side of her face are blown.
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07/18/2007 10:46:49 AM
There's too much going on in the background.
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