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Date Uploaded: Jul 15, 2007

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 07/16/2007 09:47:39 AM
I like this one a lot. A few comments if you want them.
- you have beautiful leading lines in the small stream with it's green color. they lead the viewer to the center/left, where the interesting darker mountain is. from here the eyes can go to the eft or right and are brought back where the stream is. You can tell how much I like the composition, can't you?
- crop the picture closer around the lines of the stream.
- this way you eliminate the bright band at the bottom. A bit will remain to frame/close it towards the bottom.
- if you crop it closer, you also will elimiate the left part of the montains. they are not adding anything to this picsture.
- the same with the sky. too featureless to include too much of it.
There is so much to discover you should lead the viewer.
I tried to crop it to what I tried to explain above.

I very much like the contrast between the bright patches and the darker right mountain side.

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