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09/11/2007 09:08:27 PM |
Actually, I think you did well at capturing both her solitude and the texture of the beach. I'm torn about the bird, though. It adds a little visual surprise but also reduces that solitary feel. |
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07/18/2007 06:05:36 PM |
nice i wish we had a beach to hang out on. |
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07/11/2007 10:28:45 AM |
I quite like the crop, I think by getting rid of the bird you'd really increase the feeling of aloneness (?). |
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07/10/2007 01:39:34 PM |
Not a bad composition at all. The bird in the upper-right corner really adds to it. I might have trimmed the blue at the top, but maybe not! |
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07/09/2007 10:32:35 PM |
The perspective on this is cool. The bird adds something to the depth of the background. |
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07/09/2007 03:31:08 PM |
I like her being the only one in the photo, it gives a sense of peacefullness. |
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07/09/2007 09:56:03 AM |
It certainly looks like she's alone...except for that bird. |
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07/09/2007 06:59:43 AM |
I like how there's one lone bird up in the corner too. She looks a little sun burnt! |
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07/08/2007 09:58:34 PM |
I want to be there SO bad, I didn't notice the crop! |
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07/08/2007 05:56:50 PM |
woah there...for me this shot works fine, especially from a composition perspective. Love the lone girl and lone seagull sharing the same space yet distant from each other |
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07/08/2007 05:12:11 PM |
I find it an interesting juxtaposition between the girl and the bird. |
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07/08/2007 12:26:51 PM |
Actually I think you have done a great job of capturing the feel of being alone on the beach! I might agree about losing the bird; I really love how her bathing suit and bag blends in with the sand; very restful image! |
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07/08/2007 11:17:24 AM |
this is really interesting. but i'd actually crop the bird out, i like the idea of her being the last lifeform left on the beach. but it's still great either way.
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07/08/2007 11:15:38 AM |
The bird takes the cake here - wonderful photo. It was interesting in the thumb and didn't disappoint in the full size. Has a very minimalistic feel to it, especially since the colors are sort of monochromatic. Great job. |
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07/08/2007 02:23:45 AM |
I guess you'd need to be higher up.
I like that there's a seagull in the frame as well. |
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