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07/23/2007 07:54:02 PM |
Greetings from the critique club!
As mentioned before this is a really great idea that is kinda hard to pull off effectively. Some editing in post would have helped this shot quite a bit I think.
That aside getting away from the wall might have helped as there are some harsh shadows. Also, since your are using a long exposure anyways, I would have used a smaller aperture to get more sharpness.
A different angle would also help set the mood a bit and perhaps get better lighting of your face (especially on the left hand capture).
I'd be interested in seeing another attempt at this shot addressing some of the issues presented here and in other comments. |
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07/17/2007 09:22:22 AM |
| Good idea, however the execution is poor. Difficult thing to do on basic edit and get right. |
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07/15/2007 02:12:12 PM |
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07/13/2007 05:11:54 PM |
| sorry, you had bad lighting, looks fake, and one of you is bigger than the other! |
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07/13/2007 05:04:03 PM |
This could work out better with a different background... even a dark black towel behind you would make this image just POP!
But your worst nightmare... does that mean that you never struggle with yourself?? |
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07/13/2007 01:39:16 AM |
| I'm really curious how you did this. The lighting and shadows are pretty harsh. |
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07/12/2007 04:17:29 PM |
| These are hard to do well. Experiment more with lighting and tonal range. |
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07/12/2007 12:13:30 PM |
| very cool concept, i think the idea had alot of potential, I would have liked to see it portrayed as an internal battle, but its all good. |
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07/11/2007 05:16:04 PM |
| Image is too flat - lacks depth |
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07/11/2007 09:16:45 AM |
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07/11/2007 08:07:00 AM |
| nice effort in basic - the lighting is really flat here and the contrast needs some boosting |
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07/11/2007 07:59:02 AM |
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07/11/2007 01:04:34 AM |
| if you cant kick your own ass you got problems... ;) |
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