| Actually, I think the wb is not a big factor. For me anyway, when I see a shot of performers, I know they are on stage, with stage lighting, I at least expect to see the effects of that live lighting. I see more weakness in the framing of the shot, honestly. The framing feels 'uncomfortable'. It's not a head shot, it's not a half or 3/4 shot. His arm is cut off on the bottom of the frame, and the guitar is not prominent. I'm left really wishing I could see more of the performer, adding context to the scene. Especially in a 'Solo' theme of the shot, I'd like to see that he is jamming out a solo, if you know what I mean. Also, a minor thing, but the angle has the line of lights running through his head, a little bit of an awkward compositional feeling. |
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