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Mellow Yellow
Mellow Yellow
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Challenge: Burst of Color II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Canon EF 100mm f/2.8 USM Macro
Location: Albuquerque, NM
Date: Jun 23, 2007
Aperture: f/1.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/4000 sec
Galleries: Macro, Floral
Date Uploaded: Jun 26, 2007

 Just some flowers I was walking by...I like it, but I don't think it works amazingly well for this challenge. So, I'll enter it anyway!

Shot in RAW: adjusted white balance and exposure

PS:
Crop
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Statistics
Place: 246 out of 286
Avg (all users): 4.6319
Avg (commenters): 4.8333
Avg (participants): 4.5763
Avg (non-participants): 4.6585
Views since voting: 686
Views during voting: 227
Votes: 182
Comments: 10
Favorites: 1 (view)

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AuthorThread
 07/10/2007 02:56:30 AM
*Critique Club*

"Mellow Yellow" is an nice entry into the Burst of Color challenge.

I think your subject is great, I like that are subjects are really lying on the thirds of the frame. I am not sure if the soft focus was intentional or maybe there was a breeze blowing by. I think the movement does give your piece something interesting that draws the viewer in. I wonder if you had just focused on one flowers specifically and let the rest melt into the background it would have scored a little higher.

Overall this is a nice piece the colors are nice, a little soft for a burst of color but I think it works well for this piece. I really look forward to seeing more entries from you, best of luck!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/03/2007 01:01:22 AM
Good placement
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 07/01/2007 09:10:33 PM
Composition is appealing, natural color okay (try darkening the yellows/greens with contrast adjustment or curves in PS post processing, the lack of focus is going to spoil the voting. 4
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 07/01/2007 05:49:36 PM
very nice texture and composition
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 06/30/2007 02:34:30 PM
focus is off a touch. Looks like a little motion blur. Maybe use a tripod? Other than that, pretty good composition.
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 06/29/2007 06:28:49 AM
Nice use of DOF. Colours are good but not brilliant. Background flower cause sense of distraction.
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 06/28/2007 08:26:04 PM
Not the best focus on this capture.
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 06/27/2007 10:13:34 PM
Interesying DOF and comp. OOB. I like it
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 06/27/2007 06:52:15 PM
Blurry...not very much color.
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 06/27/2007 10:56:23 AM
Outstanding. Beautiful colors and DOF. Focus seems a little soft on the subject, but I like the overall softness of the image.
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