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06/25/2007 07:14:38 PM |
| Neat idea. For me the cloth backdrop hurts this with the wrinkles, maybe if it were further back and blurred out it would help or if it were say black and out of focus. Just a few thoughts, anyway very sharp and good exposure control, great idea! 6 |
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06/25/2007 05:56:31 PM |
| Nice color, clarity, and content but for composition in this challenge a little more of the bg would be better imo. Great technicals and nice blue eyes. |
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06/24/2007 11:10:56 AM |
| Youe need to move the model away from the background in order to take a shallower DOF. (the goal being to not show the wrinkles or texture in the backdrop,)Great idea and fits the theme well. |
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06/24/2007 12:26:34 AM |
| You could have improved this by positioing her away from her background, that way you could use a shallow depth of field to blur out the background and minimize the shaddow |
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06/23/2007 02:17:21 PM |
| I love your idea, the girl, the hat, the composition. However, the background is no good :-( Try putting more distance between your subject and the background, and use a large aperture to blur the wrinkles. |
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06/23/2007 12:48:27 AM |
Fit Challenge Criteria: 0/2
Contrast/Color: 1/2
Composition: 1/2
Photo Quality: 1/2
My Subjective Affinity: 1/2
This photo does have negative space, but there is no impact in it at all. The only real impact is the subject's blue eyes. The white sheet needs to be whiter, and the red hat also lacks the vivid colors that would really make that stand out. |
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06/23/2007 12:31:30 AM |
| This is very nice colorwise. Your composition is good. Cute model. |
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06/23/2007 12:19:34 AM |
| a more complex shape will create interesting ns |
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06/20/2007 06:56:32 PM |
| this is a cute image and good for the challenge, might do a bit better if the backround wasn't a sheet. |
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06/20/2007 05:00:39 PM |
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06/20/2007 04:50:50 PM |
| Cute! Next time, I would move the model a few feet away from the backdrop. |
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