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09/15/2002 06:41:00 PM |
| Great detail - I would have cropped the dark on the bottom out. |
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09/14/2002 02:04:00 PM |
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09/14/2002 12:45:00 PM |
| The composition suffers from the distraction of the foreground...the dish? And the focus is not as sharp as it could be.. The colors are good. Generally though, it seems like, a little more effort could be put into arranging this and it would be first class. I hope this will help. |
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09/13/2002 11:15:00 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing8,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating6. Autool
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09/13/2002 05:31:00 PM |
| This picture seems a little out of focus. |
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09/13/2002 04:36:00 PM |
| Cool. Is the apple out of focus? |
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09/12/2002 07:49:00 PM |
| Nice set up shot, but shotting across the bowl face implies (to me) focus across the frame. In case I'm wrong, 8 Swash |
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09/11/2002 01:01:00 PM |
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09/11/2002 05:48:00 AM |
| I really like the way you have used DOF in this shot; it works really well. I also think you have achieved a really good balance of colour between the positive and negative areas and both the composition and camera angle work well. Nice shot (8) |
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09/11/2002 04:51:00 AM |
| This is interesting. But I think the bowl (?) edge forground detracts a bit. Good background. The old banana is kind of interesting, but doesn't seem to fit with the apples, which are fresh. I like it, but it has a sort of disharmony that's a little confusing. 6 |
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09/10/2002 06:07:00 PM |
| A couple of things.. I wish that either more of the bowl were showing, or less. I think that the dark rim in the front is almost distracting. The colors of the fruit are very nice. I might have prefered a more yellow banana, but this is fruit, not perfection. right? The focus and clarity are nice. Overall good photo. Good luck in the challenge. ~HBunch7187~ |
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09/10/2002 01:54:00 PM |
| Composition is a little disjoint. The edge of the basket on the bottom is very distracting, it stops all flow in the image down there. |
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09/10/2002 12:11:00 PM |
| I think this lacks a focal point and it isn't the clearest picture. The perspective seems like it could use a little help. I'm not sure what, but it just doesn't "seem" right. |
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09/09/2002 12:22:00 PM |
| Great photo, but the edge of the bowl/basket at the bottom is distracting. |
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