bit too much of a yellow colour cast over the whole image - if you dont have an image eiting program to fix it - watch your white balance when taking the shot. If it was intentional then you know that, but i'm still not a fan.
I think this border is going to bring down your score. Without the border and with advanced editing, this could be an interesting image. I like the tangle of fingers, like you can't tell anymore where one person stops and the other begins. :)