Greetings from the critique club!
Pros:
You have an unusual and creative composition; I love to see experiments! I think the interesting take helped keep peoples interest up, and got them to overlook some technical issues.
Cons:
As I suggested above, there are technical problems with the shot; it's a bit noisy and blurry. The feathers are likely blurred from a little bit of movement between the different shots? Your hand is quite out of focus on the left side of the shot.
The Challenge:
This is one of those challenges with a lot of room for interpretation; I can't claim I really get what you were going for here, but the sense of movement from right to left, and the changing number of fingers, does imply some transition.
Thanks!
-Evan |