I love this shot, but am working on my photoshop skills and chose this picture (and some others) to see what I could do with them. I am not doing anything else with them, other than giving you the edit. Just so you know. Anyway, here's my edit. I hope you like it.
I actually like this one better than the one you entered. I think with a bit cropped off the top and bottom of this it would have done better than the one you entered. jmo of course.