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06/11/2007 06:35:21 PM |
| She has elements of classic beauty. But the photograph needs work to selectively reveal it. |
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06/07/2007 02:38:08 PM |
Pretty girl, nice tones.
I have some doubts about the crop - I find the bright coloured triangle on the left of the picture leads the eye away from the main focal point of the picture, and would consequently rather have more room on the right (plain dark background.
I think I would rather she made eye contact with the viewer as well to increase the intimacy.
Good shot though. |
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06/07/2007 04:39:29 AM |
| I like the lighting. I'm not sure if I like the POV or not. Feels like I'm on a step latter looking down at her. Perhaps if she was further back it would work better. Not sure. |
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06/07/2007 03:45:27 AM |
First thought, too tight on the neck, or as Don put it, "big head". She is pretty, has engaging eyes and makes me want to know more about her.Why is there a pole in the way? The mole draws me, I wonder if i find it interesting or distracting. Curious to know what subtractive lighting is?
Looking at it more, I realize she isn't looking right at the camera but just enough for you to think she is at first glance. That's a bit odd. |
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06/06/2007 11:46:28 PM |
| the model is freaking me out. why isn't she looking at me? what's over my shoulder? I keep looking but I don't see anything. I'd like more context. All I see is a big head. |
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06/05/2007 09:21:57 PM |
| Really nice BW. Great tones, light and shadow. |
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