There are too many distractions in the photo. The lines of his shirt, the coffee-mate and sugar, the dark shadow under his arm, his tie etc. If you recomposed and drew in tighter to the coffee, leaving enough detail to show there's a guy wearing a tie, you could bring out a stronger message and in turn, make a stronger photo.
Now this is cute and original. LoL...this is going into my favorites. You have captured the perfect 'feel'. I like the sharpened-look as well because I think it fits with the theme of your image.
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