Greetings from the Critique club
hmmm, this one is difficult to comment one.
The colour is good, and it is an interesting idea. That said, I'm afraid the shot itself is not really compelling.
Possibly a different lighting technique would have created some drama, or a different angle. Illuminate from a side more to create harsher shadows.
As this is, it is a good study of the leather but there is no WOW factor.
Including the snap is a good idea, but compositionally it doesn't quite work.
I don't know what this is, but what comes to mind is that if you could bend it and have the snap be profiled and cause the leather to be more, rough (for lack of a better term) it could be quite interesting.
Remember, these are just my ideas..
I hope this helps.
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