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hanging on the edge of soberity
hanging on the edge of soberity
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: On the Edge (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-S75
Location: Johns house in East Pointe
Date: Dec 21, 2003
Aperture: f/2.1
ISO: iso-100
Shutter: 1/50 sec
Galleries: Cityscape, Travel
Date Uploaded: Dec 21, 2003

I had a lot of ideas for this challange, unfortantly the weather wasnt corporating for the few that i wanted to try, the other fotos that i wanted to do with this one never panned out.

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02/01/2004 03:54:57 PM
At least it wasn't last :D
01/06/2004 10:03:37 PM
Yeah, it's a snapshot. But at least you're having fun.
Also, either it's "sobriety" (not soberity) or irony.
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01/06/2004 06:48:01 PM
Greeting and happy new year from the critique club. Your title here is what rescues this shot. It certainly makes you think not only subject but photographer had one too many. Here's my critique hope it helps...first of all this is not a flattering shot of your main girl (tho she does look drunk). There is a lot of 'stuff' in the background, the doorframe the white door, this extra hand attached to no body, the balloons? on the top. I think you could of improved this shot by doing a much closer crop to start. And perhaps be adding the hand only person. The lighting here is also blasée (indoor light is usually bad unless studio lighting of some sort). I try to stay away from it when I can. Well I hope that helps, I find focusing on one aspect of shooting at a time helps, I think working on backgrounds may be a good place to start.
Keep shooting and learning : )
lynn
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/30/2003 08:34:46 PM
It's a snapshot and not very well focused one at that... Only thing I see that really fits the challenge is the title...
TC
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/30/2003 05:07:40 PM
C'mon.
12/29/2003 02:56:44 PM
This is a fun capture, but perhaps would have more impact if cropped in or framed better in general.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/29/2003 07:55:43 AM
Kind of snapshotty to me
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12/27/2003 08:33:23 PM
Looks like a fun time !
12/27/2003 09:47:26 AM
Not a bad party snapshot, but it needs more care in composition and lighting to make it more than that.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/26/2003 10:50:44 PM
I assume by the poor focus here that the photographer was drunk as well.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/26/2003 10:31:37 PM
Hanging??? Looks hung!
12/25/2003 10:12:35 PM
Idea works, but the pointed-too-high composition and perspective/tilt is working against it.
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12/24/2003 04:59:46 PM
hah, sober my ass..


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