convert from raw, layers, desaturate, gradient, eraser, dodge/burn...
i'm new at this style of editing...it was quite the trial and error...not sure i'm at all satisfied with the results yet.....last minute entry
Statistics
Place: 384 out of 556 Avg (all users): 5.0975 Avg (commenters): 4.8000 Avg (participants): 5.0484 Avg (non-participants): 5.2800 Views since voting: 802 Views during voting: 354 Votes: 236 Comments: 9 Favorites: 0
Good placement of your subject in relation to the bg - nice bokeh effect. Nice job of doing the selective desat on a tricky item (hair!). :) Good luck in the challenge.
I think I understand what you were going for here, but I would recommend one of two things. Either have her eyes open, with an intense stare at the camera, or make it seem that she's feeling the wind on her face with a fan or something. Just a couple thoughts.