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Challenge: Vanishing Point II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Pentax K10D
Lens: Pentax DA 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 AF
Location: zurich
Date: May 15, 2007
Aperture: 16
ISO: 400
Shutter: 90
Galleries: Architecture
Date Uploaded: May 15, 2007

the building of the helbling company in zurich

i shot this pic in inspiration of tha vanishing point of large buildings.


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Place: 142 out of 195
Avg (all users): 5.1121
Avg (commenters): 4.7500
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Views since voting: 524
Views during voting: 295
Votes: 223
Comments: 5
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05/24/2007 09:02:32 PM
Hi Soeren,
I like your composition and frameing here and the way you captured the cloud cover reflecting off of the two buildings (nice lighting). However I really am hard pressed to see your title (business building) and the image itself fitting into the challange (vanishing point). Try and be a little more aggressive with your title, tieing it together with your image & challange. I also was very distract with the darkness (bottom center & about 1/2 up the image)the total loss of even the faintest detail is lost along with the back edge on the smaller building is murder it is the frst thing the eye is attracted to.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/18/2007 09:24:22 PM
ooooh! The lighting, so dark! This must be some Hollywood's bad guy's lair or something! lol!

Seriously, love the photo. Great composition, very moody lighting, great capture... but I'd like to feel the perspective even more to fall within the current challenge theme. 7
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05/18/2007 03:31:53 AM
Needs something more. I think that as a comp it is very nice, but perhaps a lower perspective, or closer, might have given a better idea of vanish.
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05/16/2007 11:16:08 AM
DNMC
05/16/2007 08:57:36 AM
This does draw my eye up, I guess I would consider this to meet challenge. 7
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