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05/22/2007 07:40:41 PM |
I like how you have achieved this wonderful free spirited triptych.....
The top image give me a feeling of serenity, and peace, so maybe you could have improved this image, by placeing the top image in the bottom position, as the other two images definately show me the feeling of movement. I would have used the last image first in the top left position, then the wonderful image of her looking behind in the top right hand position, and then the top panarama image placed below.
The balance may have then given the viewer a better perspective and a defferant way of telling this story.....
Message edited by author 2007-05-22 19:43:33. |
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05/15/2007 04:07:57 PM |
the top picture is impressive just because you have this huge piece of fabric flowing out so far, but the two on the bottom are much more graceful, where the woman seems to be one with the fabric. the woman on top seems a little stiff.
In general, I think the two bottom pictures are good photos in themselves. The triptych doesn't do much for me. And the drop shadows make it even worse: they keep the photos too separate. The illusion is that they're floating above the mat. What purpose does that serve? |
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05/15/2007 02:08:45 PM |
| The color and saturation on these are excellent - very crisp! Reading what others have said, I do like the top image, but perhaps on it's own as it is much "straighter" than the other two. All have a lovely freeing feeling to them, and are just darn pleasant to look at! (You do have some sensor dust - very faint - just above her head in the two lower shots.) |
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05/15/2007 01:43:11 PM |
| I agree with everything Mary said. The top one tries to fill that big space, but doesn't quite succeed. I especially agree about wanting to be barefoot on a beach! |
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05/15/2007 01:03:30 PM |
| Thanks Mary now you've pointed that out I have another one that might work better on the top, I'll try it. |
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05/15/2007 01:00:19 PM |
I enjoy the storytelling sequences - the big picture, come in closer, and closer. I love the grace of the bottom 2 photos. I feel the need for a different top photo. It doesn't have the same curvy and sensual feeling that the bottom 2 have.
I wish I were on the beach barefooted instead of stuck in an office. |
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