Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: It's difficult to find your main focal point. It looks like your focus locked onto the rail instead of the preferred area of the pigeon's eye.
Lighting: Your lighting is pretty good, but maybe just a bit flat. I think a little curves adjustment would have helped out a good deal.
Composition/Content: I like your leading lines and your rule of thirds use. The eye is immediately drawn to the nice placement of the subject, while the rail, sidewalk and street lines all work well together to draw the eye around the frame.
My Opinion: Funny, but not quite what the voters were looking for. With a better placement of your focus and a little bit of a lighting adjustment, I think this would have placed a bit better.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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